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Za'in Kenobi



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posted 05-19-2002 02:50 PM     Profile for Za'in Kenobi   Author's Homepage   Email Za'in Kenobi     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Tatooine.

A place filled with dust, and mystery. Once holding the strongest of Jedi's ever upon it's planet, from Anakin Skywalker, to his son Luke. Where breezes blew with the help of dust, and the shines of stars in the night seemed like the bliss of a god upon the whole planet. The eyes of stars, shimmering down upon the people, along with the moon of smiles. Then their was the dust, with the mixture of colors clasping down into blue, crimson red, and many others burning through the sky.

Tatooine.......

The warm dust, of near night brushed through the world like the wind did in the desert. Rapidly burning along the sands of the barren, sollitutde terrain of the desert, as a speck of shining stars glistered in the distances of the sky. Slowly a sleak, black, craft ship rolled through the discoloration of vibrant colored cloud, coming down upon the rugid surface below. A sizzling sound of dust burning under the ship, rose, and blazed in the vicinity. With a vibration of the ground, and a clamp of the hindges, the ship came to a land. Foams of dust circled around the ship, and abruptly came to a fall with the spurting fall of a ramp, and a opening of a door.

A tall being, covered in the cloaking garments of white came out, with only his head exposed. Showing his humanly attractive facail features, with his dirty blonde hair slumping over his eyes nicely. His brood frame consumed in the smooth fabriced clothing that covered him from the hard winds of the planet.

Behind him came another, with the cloaks of pure brown, with his hood covering over his face, and a large, decently, long brown hair braid, with small nots much like the deceased Anakin, and Obi-Wan Kenobi of the far past, as they were padawanes. The hood grasped the the darkness upon the face, hiding him from sight, and also the sandy, desert foundation from whittering within his eyes, and blinding him momentarly. His frame was sharp, and young, but muscular enough to defend himself in hand-to-hand combat with nearly anyone of humanly height in the galaxy.

"We will not yet announce to the Council of are training...as they may decline. After they see what you can actually do after my procise training, they will openly welcome you into the breed of Jedi Knights." The older, taller of the two stated, with his eyes darting toward his younger. The calmness of his light, vibrant blue eyes beating like the heart within his chest. His lips curled into a optimistic smirk, burning with complete confideces in his "Young" Padawane.

"Yes....Xaruka." The younger stated, running his hand slowly from his thick fabriced hood, throwing it down upon the back of his neck, revealing his also charming features of youth. Every part of his face was perfect for a humanoid, or human eye.

The youthful of the two's brown hair hung over his eyes in a spiky, sleek form, hiding his eyes with the mangificant braid enhancemnt of beauty, and youth rolling along his right shoulder blade, and down to the mid of his chest.

"We will begin.......now." The older stated, with a single, boot footsteps ahead along the ground, with his head kneeling down, and his optimistic smirk of confidences, frowning down into a form of seriousness.

The elder reached down toward his metal, mecanical weaponary at his waist, known as a lightsaber, beholding a pure destructive energy within it, that blazed out in the form of a blade. A moment whirled out, known as a time, with the whole galaxy consuming it, and the lightsaber was out, and the light burned no longer black as in a previous fight, but a pure, sizzling silver.

"The training has BEGUN!!"

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Star Wars: Dark Apprentice: Episode I

Anakin trains under the look of Obi, meanwhile a Apprentice of the Darkness has faded away into the depths of light, heading for the one who killed Maul. What shall happen?


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Za'in Kenobi



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posted 05-20-2002 10:22 PM     Profile for Za'in Kenobi   Author's Homepage   Email Za'in Kenobi     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
A near two weeks passed through the time of training which would prepare the young Padawane, known as Za'in, under his master Xaruka-Bui Cha, of the Jaruka Race, who had once been the young Jedi Warrior under the teaching of Yoda so long ago. A form of hand-to-hand combat was thorougly focused on, along with the handling of a lightsaber in the two weeks, but clearly he wasn't up to the potiental of a Jedi Knight, but he was strong enough to defend himself against near any Padawane Sith, and maybe even against a Sith Lord of low expirence. Still the training continued, vigoursly fighting through hand-to-hand combat, of great style, and grace along side the great handling of a lightsaber.
The shining gleam of the distant sun coming up in the smooth mourning. The bliss coloration of the heavens, and the great mountations of the out-reach range, combining to be one in which inabled the eye to know when the heavens end, and the world started. The loving air of the wind blowing through the dust, as the sounds of beating feet, pounded lightly against the foundation of sand. Crimson orange, and sizzling blue burning through the world, creating a large, smooth atompshere of beatitude.

Two men stood motionlessly afront each other, with their fingers positioned, and some fingers knuckled, while others were not. One, shorter, and youthful then the other was drenched in the tight, hard shell of a old age, anicent Ninja suit, with a band of hair hanging nicely down his shoulder to his rib cage area-with his brown spikey hair hanging nicely over his eyes, covering them in the its dimness.

Meanwhile, the other was covered in the sleek white fabrics of Jedi outfit, with it falling nicely over his body, and reaching down to his knees. His tight brown, rugid outer shelled pants, consuming the soft insides that warmed his body in the cold- yet emotionally warming winds.

"Strike!" The senior of the two exclaimed, reaching down through his lothing taking out his one army weaponary, known as a Jedi technological handle in the boundaries of his clintch. With a silver, gray touch of hue sparkling out in the form of a blade; with holding the pure destrucive energy that killed, and destroyed warriors amoungst the galaxy.

His younger, less expirenced opponent thrusted his hand into his holster at his waist, which was strapped in the glamourish gold belt, putting much weight upon his ripped, muscular body; ramming his blazing weaponary, with a dim, smoldering black blade, roasting out.

Quickly, the young contender swatted downward at his opponent, with it being blocked by the youth's antagonist, and teacher's own lightsaber. Diving into a quick instant of slashing, and blistering bolt. Both showiung their admirable intensifying grace with every second-taking movement. Speed swirled all in the eye-blinking second showing the great ability of a Jedi Warrior, and their quickness.

A abrupt end with a quick adjustment of the elder's hand sent the boy to the ground, with a gaint swurve of the older being's lips going back, as he rose his head slightly up to show a sort of pride.

"You have earned it. We shall talk of the orginzation." The older one stated, his name Xaruka, of the Jaruka race, homeland to the world of Jusukin.

"T...The orginzation?"

[ 05-20-2002 10:23 PM: Message edited 1 time, lastly by Za'in Kenobi ]

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Star Wars: Dark Apprentice: Episode I

Anakin trains under the look of Obi, meanwhile a Apprentice of the Darkness has faded away into the depths of light, heading for the one who killed Maul. What shall happen?


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