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Topic: The Goodbye...
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Jamel Garth
LumbiaSith
Member # 336
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posted 12-24-2002 06:17 PM
     
The freight ship slwoly ventured downward to the bay. Jamel had recently awoken from his slumber and was ready to say his goodbye to the Master and find a ship that he could ship off on. When the ship was placed nicely against the surface, Jamel rushed toward the door, leaping enthusastically awaiting the opening the door. Suddenly it opened... The boy smiled behind him and waved happily toward the Master in a show of goodbye and was on his way, running down the path. He was happy to be back on his planet, but even happier that he was in the arms of freedom. Soon he'd be gone though, he'd have to say goodbye to those that he left behind so long ago. Rushing into the store that he once worked at he was going to ask for a favor from the man, but before he entered he heard the sound of rumbling in their. Someone was talking to themselves, and the young boy could feel it was one of anger by the tone. Rushing in, he stared up at the tall, slender man. The man quickly turned his head over to the young boy. The man's face was old and ruggid, filled with scars of age. "Oh!! Is it really you...Jamel! Is it?" The man's face slowly light up as he heard the answer and the two went through the request information of the boy. Jamel getting as he asked and fixing a few things within in the shop during their conversation he was off the planet, going from the yard of the Tattonie store. Leaving into space, he gave his goodbye with gesture of his hand and was gone again. -------------------- "The Castle in the Sky.."-Jamel Garth
Posts: 117 | From: Somewhere in the Galaxy | Registered: Sep 2002 | Logged: 198.81.26.170
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Mara1Jade
Expanded Universe Goddess and Corran Obsessor
Member # 68
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posted 12-24-2002 06:56 PM
(((OCC: I don't know if you are around to read this at the moment, but FYI it's highly doubtful Shawn and Jamel could land on Tatooine as it has been attacked by Alcron.; see Shattered Green in this same forum. And even if they DID land on Tatooine, I think this should have gone in Shattered Green anyway. I'll figure this out later tonight when I have more time.)))[ 12-24-2002 06:58 PM: Message edited 1 time, lastly by Mara1Jade ] -------------------- Small minds think in small terms!
~~CMH, creator and writer of Shayla Petrolu, Erik Kartan, Shawn Petrolu, Terrin Danner, Jasyn Lancaster, Matt Stanza, Aaron Barnes, And Taylor Garrison~~
Posts: 972 | From: Jacksonville, FL, USA | Registered: Sep 2000 | Logged: 65.80.107.75
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Mara1Jade
Expanded Universe Goddess and Corran Obsessor
Member # 68
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posted 12-25-2002 07:29 PM
(((OCC:Just move it to Shattered Green. If it's wrong we'll deal with it then. But at least it'll be in the right thread if it's usable.)))-------------------- Small minds think in small terms!
~~CMH, creator and writer of Shayla Petrolu, Erik Kartan, Shawn Petrolu, Terrin Danner, Jasyn Lancaster, Matt Stanza, Aaron Barnes, And Taylor Garrison~~
Posts: 972 | From: Jacksonville, FL, USA | Registered: Sep 2000 | Logged: 65.80.107.75
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